Once upon a time there was 2 boys eating lots of chocolate fish. They started to get thirsty so they went in the fridge and sure lots of bright yellow,brown drink called l&p they quickly grabbed it and drink it on there grandpa blue warm comf chair .They find more food like kiwifruit,pineapple lumps, pavlova,tip top,jett plans they ate and ate when there grandpa arrived home.Grandpa drop his ingredient and said don’t eat all of those food without me .They were snoring loud like 3 lion in the cage they woke up in the morning with lollies on their heads and whip cream on their faces. Grandpa seen two white sheep one kiwi inside there house and grandpa said why are there animal in our house I don’t know said one of the boy. It a dream said one of the boy oh well said grandpa. They woke with lollies in there hair and whip cream on there faces grandpa said to the boys it was fun last night eating all of the food drinking all of the l&p because we were so hungry that night said grandpa . Grandpa hug the boys and said let watch TV okay grandpa.
I wrote this story with Montana
I found it easy because I was creating words that suit my story and making words up so it can be better.
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